Rememberance

A really interesting piece with an interesting concept going for it.
I like how she leans and the hair follows her. You can really tell she is in the shower, even before reading the description.
As for critique though, I feel that if there is one thing that could improve this, it would be to make the lines separating shapes better.
I’m not sure if it might be because you drew with a graphite pencil before you used your colouring pencils, but lines like the one for her nose is really blending with her hair, making the overall shape hard to tell.
Still, the point comes a cross, and you seem to have it well planned out in the other aspects. Things like the simplicity of the image, the way her hair cover most her features, yet shows the eye to give her more of a personality than just the shape, etc.
(Also, I really do have to apologise for being so late at this feedback. )